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Josie ([personal profile] josiemus_prime) wrote in [community profile] moviescriptending2009-07-29 04:02 am
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Post #9.

another synonym for still not over you (pete/patrick + andy/mixon, g.i.n.a.s.f.s fic)


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Anamoly

(Anonymous) 2009-07-30 06:51 am (UTC)(link)
Its short, more of a ficlet I guess, but just what popped into my head.

Patrick had always been something of an anomaly to Ashlee. He seemed nice enough when they first met, he brought life to Pete in a way no one else could, he'd attended their wedding with his boyfriend and kept Pete from flaking out at last minute. Ashlee couldn't understand him, both could argue with Pete for hours, with Ashlee he sighed and gave up as it progressed into a real fight more and more often but with Patrick they would keep arguing until they were interrupted. Patrick has always had a certain quality that Ashlee didn't, Ashlee had never known what it was but something about Patrick gravitated people towards him.

Patrick had always been something of an anomaly to Ashlee. He and Pete had inside jokes that even their family didn't understand, there was always and undercurrent in their relationship no matter what the situation, he and Pete had an understanding but no one else knew what it was. Patrick could sit with Pete for hours as he wrote, not speaking and he would sit with Pete in times of trouble or stress providing support for each other through presence alone.

Patrick had always been something of an anomaly to Ashlee, he could make Pete smile like no one else could and he didn't care about any emotional baggage he had. Patrick wasn't exactly a threat to Ashlee during their marriage or after but his presence often felt for reasons passing understanding. When she and Pete argued, Ashlee often had to stop herself from responding "only Patrick would understand."

Patrick had always been something of an anomaly to Ashlee but when they met for the first time Ashlee knew he held a piece of Pete's heart and he always would, through his marriage to Ashlee some part of him always belonged to Patrick whether he knew it or not wasn't something Ashlee thought about but Patrick was always there.

Re: Anamoly

(Anonymous) 2009-08-01 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Not the OP, but I really enjoyed this. Particularly this line - When she and Pete argued, Ashlee often had to stop herself from responding "only Patrick would understand."

Brilliant.