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Josie ([personal profile] josiemus_prime) wrote in [community profile] moviescriptending2009-08-05 10:19 am
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Post #10.

pete/patrick (pete does something drastic to keep patrick close)
anamoly (pete/ashlee, pete/patrick, ashlee's thoughts on pete and patrick's friendship)
leftovers (pete/patrick, patrick wants pete to come back to chicago)


Fuck yeah, tenth post >:D we should do something crazy, like streaking... let's all go not-anon! ... Or not. Optional? To each their own~

This week's theme is song lyrics.


Have fun!

Tequila, Lime, and Patsy Cline

(Anonymous) 2009-08-08 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
A/N: I had all these big plans, but they just fell flat when I went to write it, hence this turning out to be incredibly short, and a tiny bit lame. Maybe someone else will do it better, but I didn't want to leave it unanswered if I had ideas.

I’m crazy, crazy for feeling so lonely,

I’m crazy, crazy for feeling so blue.

I knew, you’d love me as long as you wanted

And then I knew you’d leave me for somebody new.


“Sing it, sister,” Patrick saluted the swaying woman who crooned along with the karaoke machine. The only thing keeping her upright was her death grip on the microphone stand.

Worry, why do I let myself worry,

Wondering what in the world I could do


Patrick watched in wonder. She wasn’t going to make it to the end of the song, he’d bet money on that. The closed eyes, swaying body was telling him that Jose Cuero was controlling the party a hell of a lot more than she was. Still, he watched in fascination as the singer started to slide down to unconsciousness.

I’m crazy for sighin’…

Crazy for cryin’…

And I’m crazy in love with you


She hit the floor. Patrick levered himself up and walked over to the quivering women that couldn’t seem to stop the tears.

“Ashlee, it is time to give up,” Patrick whispered as he bent down to the level of the weeping blond on the stage. “Pete is not coming back.”

“But I love him, why doesn’t he love me?” she whispered as she failingly attempted to pull herself upright. Patrick sighed and reached down to help her up. Somehow he always ended up cleaning up after Pete. Still, he couldn’t help but pity her. He actually liked Ashlee. She wasn’t like Jeanae or Meghan. She was sweet and quirky.

“I don’t know. Maybe he likes falling in love better than being in love.”

“But he loves you.”

“Don’t say anything, if he figures it out he might just leave me too.”

Re: Tequila, Lime, and Patsy Cline

(Anonymous) 2009-08-15 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Love that last line...